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Rainbows...How? Why?....because you dream..
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Rainbows...How? Why?....because you dream.. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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How she lives why she and not he? because she is kind, ever gentle casts her colours and gives with light We see that thoughts and emotions are streaked in colour blue for coldness yellow for open green for freshness red for stop no man's land amber for preparation the start of the rainbow for if your mind is closed you will never see the beauty that is me so open wide those eyes of yours and look deep into the sky as the softness of the rain touches your skin so I will show my heart to you watch me as I arc and play lovingly I need not stray see me now, watch me go hold me for true colour will play upon your mind and once let go it will only be you that you can find for I can only stay where your dreams can live night and day my light will cast upon the moon the dream you'll live so very soon The colours of the rainbow I live within your smile ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-03-99).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I knew a girl...her teeth were green With just a faded tinge of white. Her lips a garish ruby red Illuminating night. A yellow tongue inside her mouth From all the liver bile. She was a gal that truly had A rainbow for a smile! I'm sorry, Rainbow. Your poem is really beautiful. It really is. I just get caught up in these urges sometimes....... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I'm laughing too much to do a thing.....you swine....you ruined my poem but made a rainbow cry...or is that smile...same thing, colours are flashing.... Now come on females...didn't he just ruin the heart....LOL...God, I wish he was near because I'd make him suffer, every single tiny piece that I could get hold of...ooops ROFLMAO ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
I liked this poem, I really did. ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Keys: You just want revenge, same as me...LOL Seriously, Thank you...these words are my thoughts before some blighter came along and sacrificed them...but, I'll have the last laugh cause hot coals he'll not like and I fancy, he'll disappear quickly or maybe need something to blow the coals out.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
 [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 09-03-99).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I loved it!!!!!  Justbleu ------------------ "Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Rainbow Girl: Beautiful!! Balladeer: Hillarious!! (one for each of you!)------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Most stunningly beautiful poem! Balladeer control your urges! LOL (it really was quite funny!) |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thanks for the smiles and the comments...:-))) Balladeer must surely be tired from all the running by now...*g* HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
RG: you know this touches me in a different way than it may anyone else...thank you as always. You are beautiful...as always. ------------------ *shadowy-one* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFLMAO!!!! Yanno, this is a bit like setting a beautiful dining table where the centerpiece is lovely and the silverware shines and the crystal sparkles and the air is full with the smells of a delightful dinner... and the neighbor kid (a very OLD kid, Balladeer! LOL) runs in and empties his pockets onto the end of the table... including the dead frog and crushed bird's egg! LOL. Great job... both of you! LOL |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Shadows You're biased.. HUGSSuthern You described that so perfectly...LOL HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful poem Rainbow Girl, read exquisitely. Michael |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 Very nice, RG |
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