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I hope I get some responses this time... :)

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Justbleu
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0 posted 09-03-99 07:35 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Magical Ride

We'll fly so high

Beyond the moon to touch the light

Embrace me in your arms this night

Hold on tight

Fly away

Dream away

Take my hand

Fade into blue

Beneath the deep green sea

Sink within

Close your eyes

Don't be afraid

I will hold you

Trust in me

We are free

I want you

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I hope to hear your comments!! Thanks!!!
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passing shadows
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1 posted 09-03-99 07:46 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

short and sweet, emits positive embers, to me, of love and lust. I like the last line, that's always a nice thing to hear from someone. I got that message on my pager once...it made me tingle!

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Its amazing how people can live so far apart but all be experiencing life in the same ways. I completely understand the message in this writing, its so universal, yet so individual for us all. By the way, I loved it!!!

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Justbleu
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Thank You both!! I am glad you enjoyed it!!

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