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The Keeper Of Keys
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0 posted 09-03-99 07:33 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

Walking through a lonely field,
Dark skies, dark clouds,
So ferociously and utterly blanked,
Your astounding glance parts the clouds so quickly,
The stars shine through the dark clouds,
Illuminating the dark skies.

A beautiful world for such a beautiful girl,
I promise you this and so much more,
Forget the foolish standards you've set for yourself,
I'll never leave your side,
Hand in hand,
Stride for stride.

Thoughts of embracing you quiver me,
Unparalleled warmth glistens in your eyes,
Such fine eyes,
So entrancing they are,
Rest well for I'll not go back on my word,
I desire your fair lips touch,
This I desire,
Oh so much.


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Justbleu
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1 posted 09-03-99 07:38 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

ooh, I like!!!

I enjoyed that!! Thanks

I'm a new member too!!

Justbleu
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2 posted 09-03-99 07:41 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

Keeper: nice work. Could be me you write of...I have those foolish standards and that glance. I liked it.

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3 posted 09-03-99 07:42 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

Thanks Justbleu. Thanks to you as well passing shadows, feedback really helps my writings. I appreciate it all!!!

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Justbleu
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4 posted 09-03-99 07:44 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Your welcome!!

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The Keeper Of Keys
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5 posted 09-03-99 07:45 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

P.S., if you liked these, check out my other ones in the teen forum. Ive posted about 5 of my recent writings there, check em' out.

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ah...remembering those days
 
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