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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
Walking through a lonely field, Dark skies, dark clouds, So ferociously and utterly blanked, Your astounding glance parts the clouds so quickly, The stars shine through the dark clouds, Illuminating the dark skies. A beautiful world for such a beautiful girl, I promise you this and so much more, Forget the foolish standards you've set for yourself, I'll never leave your side, Hand in hand, Stride for stride. Thoughts of embracing you quiver me, Unparalleled warmth glistens in your eyes, Such fine eyes, So entrancing they are, Rest well for I'll not go back on my word, I desire your fair lips touch, This I desire, Oh so much. ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
ooh, I like!!!  I enjoyed that!! Thanks I'm a new member too!! Justbleu |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Keeper: nice work. Could be me you write of...I have those foolish standards and that glance. I liked it. ------------------ *shadowy-one* |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
Thanks Justbleu. Thanks to you as well passing shadows, feedback really helps my writings. I appreciate it all!!! ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Your welcome!! Justbleu |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
P.S., if you liked these, check out my other ones in the teen forum. Ive posted about 5 of my recent writings there, check em' out. ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah...remembering those days |
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