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What I Long For...

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WhtDove
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0 posted 09-03-99 07:15 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I long for awesome sunsets
Someone to share them with,
Romantic walks along the beach
A passionate, tender kiss.
I long for summer nights
To lay beneath the moon,
Make love under twinklin stars
Or in the park at noon.
I long for summer dances
In a field filled high with wheat,
Or the coldness of a stream
Where we could hang our feet.
Romantic dinners by candlelight
A loving word from you,
A warm and steamy bath
With bubbles filled for two.
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 09-03-99 07:16 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

My dear, such a departure from your usual work!! I hope to see much more of this from you my friend.

These are truly the things of which romance is made and I for one practice them all as diligently as I can, as often as I can.
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Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive.
DreamEvilŠ



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Justbleu
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2 posted 09-03-99 07:26 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Hello I'm new around here!!!
I quite enjoyed your poem, I often dream of such things myself!!!

Thank You for sharing your poem!!

Justbleu
Poet deVine
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3 posted 09-03-99 07:36 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely! It's something I long for also - you really hit a nerve here WhtDove! How about an encore - I like this style!
Lost Dreamer
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4 posted 09-03-99 09:09 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This was very beautiful, you have wonderful thoughts.

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Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.
caroline
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5 posted 09-03-99 09:22 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Positively sublime, this! You've read my mind and written my wants

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Denise
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6 posted 09-03-99 11:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

WOW! This is great WhtDove! So romantic and lyrical! (I wouldn't mind having a weekend like this!) (or how about a whole year!)

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Denise
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7 posted 09-03-99 11:39 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

What a beautiful dream, WhtDove. I do hope you find it...

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

WhtDove
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8 posted 09-03-99 11:45 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Gosh, I am overwhelmed with these responses. Thanks to each and everyone of you!
PDV, thank you!! I think all of us women yearn for these things.
Balladeer
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9 posted 09-03-99 11:48 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

WhtDove, what a romantic you are! This is wonderful. These are wonderful thoughts and you deserve every one of them.
WhtDove
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Balladeer I am honored! I have to admit I am a die hard romantic, can't help myself. My weakness. But thank you for your compliment. It means a lot to me!!!
Dark Angel
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11 posted 09-04-99 01:06 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WhtDove, this is so beautiful,so romantic
I love it

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WhtDove
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12 posted 09-04-99 01:24 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you DAngel. Here's to dreamin!
hoot_owl_rn
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Beautiful....I wish you much luck. I dream of the same.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
doreen peri
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Everyone wants (sometimes longs) for this type of romantic love. You have painted the picture well.

I think you may want to consider a different rhyme than "with" and "kiss".... perhaps "I long for awesome sunsets/ With someone I will miss" or, better yet "I long for awesome sunsets/ a rhapsody of bliss".

just a suggestion.
Otherwise, enjoyed the read.

dp
Angel Rand
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15 posted 09-04-99 09:20 AM       View Profile for Angel Rand   Email Angel Rand   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel Rand

You got me dreaming! When done reading your poem I just sort of sat back and sighed and... ah well you know what I mean.
Your words sent my memory on a trip to another place in time. TY!
Angel
WhtDove
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16 posted 09-04-99 01:52 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you doreen for the suggestion! I appreciate that!
Angel Rand, thank you! That is what I was aiming for. It put quite the vision in my head as I was writing it. I am glad those words could give you a happy moment in time. That is the ultimate comment dear, thank you!
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17 posted 07-03-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I cannot beleive that I did not reply to this--I do remember reading it...shame on me a thousand times, but this is just the yearning of one soul to meet all existance...
Phoebee
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18 posted 07-09-2000 07:23 PM       View Profile for Phoebee   Email Phoebee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Phoebee

This poem is very beautiful.  It touched my heart.  Are there men out there that long for the same things we do?  I sure hope so.

WhtDove
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19 posted 07-09-2000 09:26 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Serenity I can   LOL  Oh well! Now ya know hahah...

Phoebee I'm not really sure about that. If there are any out there, I guess I just haven't ran into them, nor have I met them. LOL  I'm sure there are some out there. Thank You!
toes21
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20 posted 07-10-2000 03:31 PM       View Profile for toes21   Email toes21   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit toes21's Home Page   View IP for toes21

Your poem was a pleasure to read.
Adrienne
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21 posted 07-12-2000 01:04 PM       View Profile for Adrienne   Email Adrienne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Adrienne

WhtDove, with this poem you have made me to believe in such things...
Hopefeully you, as well as I have the chance to encounter such splendid contentment.
passing shadows
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nice!
RSWells
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23 posted 02-04-2005 09:19 AM       View Profile for RSWells   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSWells

I hope you knew these things,
that temporal life brings
sweet voice that n'er shall sing
now placed beyond death's sting
      -I who did not know ye

iliana
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24 posted 02-07-2005 05:26 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

I won't forget you, Becky. Love & Light, jo
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