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Well I got some responces to the last one, so I'll try again

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Starith
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Leesburg, FL USA


0 posted 09-03-99 06:42 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Starith

I lie awake and think of you again,
The way you used to look at me, your silly
little grin.

The sound of your voice, the touch of your
hand,
Seems to have slipped through my fingers
like a handfull of sand.

You're so far away,
I miss you more everyday.

I love you so,
How much you'll never truly know.

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We are only truly apperciated after we are no more!
© Copyright 1999 Starith - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
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since 06-24-99
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1 posted 09-03-99 06:58 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Been there, felt that. If its true, it never fully goes away. Hopefully you find something better. Hang in there... and welcome to the neighborhood.
Skyfyre
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since 08-15-99
Posts 1966
Sitting in Michael's Lap


2 posted 09-03-99 08:00 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Another good one ... funny how things escape you ... memories fade ...

But, take it from me ... it only takes an instant to revive them ...


Whenever Mr. Man gets back ... it will be a hot time in Starith's town that night!

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


Justbleu
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3 posted 09-03-99 08:11 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Reminds me of someone!!! I enjoyed it very much!!

Thank You!!

Justbleu
Starith
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Posts 181
Leesburg, FL USA


4 posted 09-03-99 10:16 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Thank you all for your replies.

Andrew: yes it is true, very true unfortunately. But I am learning to cope with it, slowly but surely. And thanks for the welcome.

Nocht: Ummmm...a hot time? Well maybe...then again maybe not...only time will tell. However if things keep going the way they are...it will not be so hot.

Bleu: I'm glad you like it. I write from the heart therefore my emotions come out very strong in my poems, so whether or not someone likes it or not is always a worry of mine.

Starith

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