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Seymour Tabin
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The barber

You are the barber.
The power of words cut distinctively.
The phrase, sits patiently in the chair.
The hair is sheer with a sharp scissor.
Your styling depends on your past.
The wild hairs will cut with the tame.
To finish into a sleek version of
Interpretation.
You bring up the mirror.
And nod with approve.
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excellent, as usual.
Pepper
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clever.very enjoyable read

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Nice haircut there, Seymour!
Seymour Tabin
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Passing shadows, Pepper and suthern,
thank you all for your comments and kind words. Been away a day and I'm alreay on the 2nd page. *L* to all.
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Another good one, Seymour! It's always a pleasure of course!

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Very good, Sy! This is an unusual analogy but I like it very much!
Seymour Tabin
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Dsnyder and Poet deVine.
I thank you much for the approval.
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Excellent anology...loved it!!

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