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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-09-03 07:45 AM


Kingdom Of Passions

Far away in a land
where only fingers,
and mouses
can transport,
lies a
kingdom of passions.

The largest,
brightest place
one could ever imagine,
where etchings
on the walls
are created by
the Royal Kings,
Queens, Princes,
and Princesses
of the kingdom.

Let me introduce
you to Ron,
our gallant leader.
He reaches beyond
critical obstacles
to tend
to all the aches,
and pains
of all that abide
within the
kingdom of passions.

Amongst
the acres of land
in this large,
bright place
there march
many knights
in shinning armor.
Their words
be their swords
as they tear
juice from your eyes,
or as they gently
caress a smile
to your face.
Some use their swords
to shave you
to the ground
in hilarious laughter.

Welcome
to the kingdom of passions
where minds come together
to share their inner most thoughts,
dreams, and humor.
Where everyone becomes enlightened
through the talents of others.



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Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

© Copyright 1999 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 1999-09-09 03:34 PM


How in the world did we all miss this one?
{Bump}

Balladeer
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2 posted 1999-09-09 04:03 PM


Unfortunately, it happens. Things move so fast. Thank you for bringing it back. Wonderful poem, dreamer. You have captured the essence very well.
Andrew Scott
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3 posted 1999-09-09 07:29 PM


Dreamer: Missed this one before... glad to have come about it this time around. Nicely penned. I draw my sword and bow in salute to your fine effort. Most enjoyable.
Denise
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4 posted 1999-09-09 07:34 PM


Ditto! Well done!

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Denise

Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 1999-09-10 09:45 AM


Thanks to all of you, glad you liked it.
WhtDove
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6 posted 1999-09-10 10:18 AM


I can't believe we missed this either! I'm glad it came around again. You have captured it well! I enjoyed this!

hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 1999-09-10 10:19 AM


very nicely written...I second your sentiments on this one.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Pepper
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8 posted 1999-09-10 12:05 PM


add me to all above......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Nan
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9 posted 1999-09-10 06:13 PM


This kingdom just keeps getting better and better all the time - Let's put a big ole moat around it....... Nice one, LD

caroline
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10 posted 1999-09-10 07:55 PM


Nice sentiments here, with which I completely agree Now Nan...don't go puttin' up that moat! My canoe has a hole in it right now and my paddle is broken and here I am tryin' to swim and some fool threw a giant peppermint lifesaver at me...hmmph. I had to swim away 'fore the dang thing melted and attracted sharks. I caught hold of the drawbridge at #1 just before it slammed shut, though!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
11 posted 1999-09-13 02:58 PM


I now will bow to all of our Passions family here, in honor of all the talent, and kindness that exists in this kingdom. I am thankful to have found this home where I can be inspired by the abilities of others.
LngJhnAg
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12 posted 1999-09-13 03:17 PM


Dreamer

this was a wonderful poem - except.... I've read and reread it several times and I STILL haven't found my name. Was this a mistake??? < innocent eyes >

suthern
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13 posted 1999-09-13 03:47 PM


LJA: There are some relatives that even the best of families try not to mention! LOL
Lost Dreamer
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14 posted 1999-09-22 08:03 PM


LngJhnAg: You did not recognize yourself as one of the knights in shining armor that uses his sword to shave us to the ground
in hilarious laughter. You were one of the many that I was pertaining to with that paragraph. Thanks for reading I appreciate.

suthern:LngJhn's an important part if this family, as are you and everyone else. Thanks for reading, and replying.

I apoligize to both of you for not thanking you sooner. somehow it just slipped by me.

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