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Impressions of You

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Lucie
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0 posted 09-02-99 10:56 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

Title caught you didn't it..hehe

Depressions seems to rule your day
your all alone is what you say.
Well what am I? I think inside.
"No one loves me" is what youíve cried.

"Oh woe is meÖ my life just sucks"
If ya stop whining Iíll give ya 5 bucks!!
The tears just donít seem to be stopping.
Donít rain on my parade cause you stepped in horse droppings.

Come on get a grip, get over it
my gawd its not fatalÖits only sh*t.
Stand up tall.. Iíll get the hose
its not that bad.. just how life goes.

Shake it off.. let go of your depression
the frown on your face is a bad first impression.
Smile for me.. let the light shine through
try it just once its not hard to do.


[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 09-02-99).]
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Wesley the Blue
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1 posted 09-02-99 11:13 PM       View Profile for Wesley the Blue   Email Wesley the Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wesley the Blue

Very nice. I like the attitude you portrayed so well.
Critic
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2 posted 09-02-99 11:20 PM       View Profile for Critic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Critic

nice. why the forced rhyme? Limits your words, therefore emotions.
zipknee
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3 posted 09-03-99 08:50 AM       View Profile for zipknee   Email zipknee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for zipknee

nicely written. like a slap in the face, but a good one.
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on the threshold of a dream


4 posted 09-03-99 09:33 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Sometimes we need those wakeup calls... time to quit wallowing and get on with it! *S*
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 09-03-99 10:17 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lucie,
I am confused but mostly amused.
I'm no jerk and I like your work.
passing shadows
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6 posted 04-16-2004 11:39 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

glad I came across this tonight
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