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Impressions of You
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Impressions of You |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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Title caught you didn't it..hehe Depressions seems to rule your day your all alone is what you say. Well what am I? I think inside. "No one loves me" is what you’ve cried. "Oh woe is me… my life just sucks" If ya stop whining I’ll give ya 5 bucks!! The tears just don’t seem to be stopping. Don’t rain on my parade cause you stepped in horse droppings. Come on get a grip, get over it my gawd its not fatal…its only sh*t. Stand up tall.. I’ll get the hose its not that bad.. just how life goes. Shake it off.. let go of your depression the frown on your face is a bad first impression. Smile for me.. let the light shine through try it just once its not hard to do. [This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 09-02-99).] |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Very nice. I like the attitude you portrayed so well. |
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Critic New Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 9 |
nice. why the forced rhyme? Limits your words, therefore emotions. |
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zipknee Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 35Oak Park, IL |
nicely written. like a slap in the face, but a good one. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes we need those wakeup calls... time to quit wallowing and get on with it! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lucie, I am confused but mostly amused. I'm no jerk and I like your work. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad I came across this tonight |
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