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Wesley the Blue
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0 posted 09-02-99 10:39 PM       View Profile for Wesley the Blue   Email Wesley the Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Wesley the Blue

The message has always been “chase your dreams”
Be it love, travel or occupation
Sometimes it’s not as easy as it seems
Reachable only through perspiration
Dreams are as elusive as the fairies
They need to be coerced by loving words
Be careful and quick for the wind caries
Dreams away like the strains of music chords
But be ye not also hasty for fear
Of dreams vanishing because grasped too soon
Leaving you not but blood sweat and a tear
You will soon learn that patience is a boon
The message will always be “chase your dreams”
It will not be as easy as it seems
© Copyright 1999 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
Lucie
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1 posted 09-02-99 11:02 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I liked this poem.. you had some great lines in here. good job!
Alwye
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2 posted 09-04-99 12:41 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful...and so true. Exellent, Exellent work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Ruby dagger
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3 posted 09-04-99 12:52 AM       View Profile for Ruby dagger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ruby dagger

I love this poem! dreams come true with lots of work. if they were easy to get they wouldn't be dreams.

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Luv ya

Kelly

I'm no different than the average girl, my dreams wrap around the world. -Rebecca Lynn Howard
Julie
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4 posted 09-04-99 01:02 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

You did a great job on your verse.
Persistence and persperation will always
catch dreams.

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Julie
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Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure.
Marianne Williamson
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