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Poetic Poets Perfect Pedantry

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Poet deVine
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Caliginous cacophony filled with slag
DarkSong bellows a tune to DarkRag
Mysterious melancholy chills made of
DarkRainbow shadows over DarkDove
Profound pedantry from each mouth
DarkTraveler journeys to DarkSouth
Depravity deepens and splits the whole
DarkSilver drained from each DarkSoul
Gloom gathering silent monotony
DarkSea slicing into DarkNanny
Doleful drums midnight stabbiní
DarkCrag falls prey to DarkTabin
Penumbral pulses have no choice
DarkAngel can silence DarkVoice
Wild wounds stirred into salt
DarkCat slashes into DarkWalt
Secret seminaries in darkened cowl
DarkFemme quiets the hoot of DarkOwl
Hellís halls are the Devilís mine
Hidden from sight is DarkdeVine
© Copyright 1999 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 09-02-99 09:38 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This was different. Not changing sides on us are ya? good one!
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2 posted 09-02-99 09:43 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is dark !!!

or, should it be titled..."Through the forum.....darkly"?
Nan
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Somebody - Turn on the lights in here!!
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4 posted 09-02-99 10:20 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Excellent work!

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Michael
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5 posted 09-02-99 11:32 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

May Darkness shine upon you always.
Quite refreshing.


Michael
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6 posted 09-02-99 11:59 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Oh Ms. Dark deVine... I love it!

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like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


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Jeez, My eyes were hurting towards the end..Too dark in here..!!!

Real different PDV..Well done..


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8 posted 09-03-99 02:18 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Hey, what you all talking about, did none of you see that rainbow sneak in???...LOL

Brilliant use of names PDV...:-))

Hugs

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9 posted 09-03-99 03:26 AM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

I love it.. Ms. deVine you are brillant.. I like the use of the poets names.. Now which Cat were you talking about?

Love,
Lady

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10 posted 09-03-99 03:59 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Poet, this is GREAT! I love it, well done
doreen peri
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This is quite a departure for you, ms. dv and I think you did a fabulous job with it! I love the use of vocabulary, structure of the verse, and the dark theme.

This brightened my day! MORE!

-dp
Toerag
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12 posted 09-03-99 08:59 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yea....say the title of this one five times real quick!!! Great work there deVine!!!
Poet deVine
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13 posted 09-03-99 09:19 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Just thought we needed a little levity to relax us after the stress of losing Open Forum #1. I thought perhaps we should all be 'dark' for a bit so I took the liberty of changing your 'light' names to 'dark' (got a twofer in Alicat and LadyCat and Balladeer became DarkSong). Anyway, it was fun! Thanks for your comments.
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14 posted 09-03-99 09:35 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Great poem, deVine one... but where is Sunshine when you need her? LOL
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15 posted 09-03-99 10:12 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Poet deVine,
Your dark candle lit up the forum so dark
That everyone is blinking from the spark.
And feeling around made me LOL.
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16 posted 09-03-99 10:15 AM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

Smile .... ouch ... hate it when I bump my shin wandering around in here ... Thanks DPDV
Craig
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17 posted 09-03-99 02:27 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig


Wonderful poem PDV, loved the darkness.

If darkcrag is me then this is only the second time that someone has put my name in a poem, the first was Toerag, mind you he did SPELL it right!!
Poet deVine
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18 posted 09-03-99 05:56 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Craig.. it is you! I didn't want you to see how dark it was in my poem so I removed your "i".....get it? LOL.........wait..am I the only one laughing here? Oh well..not the first time my joke was funny only to me!
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19 posted 12-02-1999 10:30 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Neener neener! Because I wanted to!
 
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