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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
like a red rubber ball in a game of jacks Happy and pensive all at once Old memories and new ideas jumbled together in a wicker basket full of dreams I'm busy and I'm bored at the same time a restlessness I can't seem to define or quell For fun I check the advice of the stars Never believed in all that astrology stuff even though it seems to know my cusped personality traits…a mix of October and November Autumn-born baby with a master-number twenty-two should be writing a love letter on this Sunday afternoon Odd, that advice, given at this moment when that half-finished letter is sitting on my desk leftover from this morning's breakfast of missing you "we are connected", you always said "our stars crossed and here we are, at destiny's doorstep" But we never went inside, as if the door was locked I'm going now, I have a letter to finish And tomorrow, when the mailman leaves I'll have posted the key in that envelope sealed with the kiss of October and colored in November's lipstick caroline 1999 all rights reserved ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
caroline, Some times you light up like a firefly. And this is one of the times. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How can I tell you how wonderful this is!? It's wonderful! I loved every line!  |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wonderful last lines and a good description of something we all feel at one time or another. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Thanks all of you!  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, liked this one. ------------------ *shadowy-one* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful imagery in this piece, I really enjoyed it ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Loved it! |
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