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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-09-02 07:16 PM


Ode to a Toad

On the edge of some water weeds,
Below a pillowed moon.
Sits a toad on a lily pad,
Croaking, a lonely croon.

Exuberant he spends the hours,
Through the flower of night,
He bloats and croaks his melody,
With overripe delight.

He calls out to the ladies fair,
To hear his raucous tune.
To lure her close and into mate.
Below a pillowed moon.

He sings rebeep in constant sweep,
Calling passionately.
He cannot stop or stay a note,
Here lies his destiny.

He croaks it from the diaphragm,
Over and over, here I am.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
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1 posted 1999-09-02 07:33 PM


That was fun and a very good read. Thanks for sharing.
Denise
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2 posted 1999-09-02 08:09 PM


So much wit and humor around here! Sure hope some of it rubs off on me!
Balladeer
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3 posted 1999-09-02 10:16 PM


Wart's it all about, Seymour?
Do we just call for mates until we croak?
Is our only goal to be a tadpole's dad?
Have I lost my mind at last?

Going to bed now. 'Night, Sy. Good poem!


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Nan
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4 posted 1999-09-02 10:23 PM


I Taught - I Toad you - It was a Frog

RE-BEEP




[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-02-99).]

Nicole
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5 posted 1999-09-03 12:53 PM


Oh my! yanno, I liked this 'un, I did.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 1999-09-03 10:43 AM


To all the above,
REBEEP,REBEEP,REBEEP,REBEEP.

traveler
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7 posted 1999-09-03 10:46 AM


SMILE ... yanno, this water can get cold ... ribbit, ribbit, ribbit ... thanks SY
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 1999-09-03 11:41 PM


Traveler,
Thank you for the ribbit.

Sue
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9 posted 1999-09-04 01:31 PM


Love it. "Overripe delight" - I wish I'd written that!
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 1999-09-04 05:22 PM


Thank you sue.
Nan
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11 posted 2008-01-27 04:09 PM


ROTFL - Only Sy could write so adeptly about a silly little toad!!




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