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No Turning Back

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snacks
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0 posted 09-02-99 03:09 PM       View Profile for snacks   Email snacks   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for snacks

She stalks the night
dress too tight
waiting for yesterday's song

Her hair is dark
she lights the spark
of every man ever, now gone.

In coloured dreams
her sorrow streams
a past can't help but be wrong.

She whispers goodbye,
can't say she didn't try.
from this, it's time to move on.

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God is seen always in a child's eyes
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1 posted 09-02-99 03:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very good snacks! It made me feel her sadness and lonliness.

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snacks
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2 posted 09-03-99 12:04 AM       View Profile for snacks   Email snacks   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for snacks

Thanks Denise. This was actually written about a person I know who completed suicide. I am glad you sensed the sadness there. chris

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This was very good! I missed it the first time! `Tis sad, I am sorry this happened! I sure wish they could find another way to deal with things!
Want to add here that I love your signature, so very true!
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4 posted 09-08-99 12:31 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I'm sorry to hear that snacks. I also have known people who have committed suicide. It's devastating. It's such an irreversible solution to a most often temporary problem.
How sad.

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