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Andrew Scott
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0 posted 1999-09-02 02:46 PM


(I know this is a repost from Forum #1 but its how I'm feeling after seeing it gone.)

Enter a young man at the crossroads who finds an older man sitting upon a nearby rock. The newcomer speaks:

Please come here.
.....I'd rather not go there.
Then tell me of this path here?
.....It is the road to nowhere.
But it must lead somewhere?
.....Yes, it goes there too.

You said where?
.....Down the road, there.
But is that not nowhere.
.....And nowhere is somewhere.
I think I shall stay here.
.....Than you are lost, too.

© Copyright 1999 Andrew Scott - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-09-02 02:50 PM


I enjoyed this Andrew, very clever!

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Denise

Andrew Scott
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2 posted 1999-09-02 05:53 PM


dsnyder: Thanks for checking in and leaving your mark. Glad you enjoyed.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 1999-09-02 06:34 PM


Very appropriate

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Andrew Scott
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4 posted 1999-09-02 08:21 PM


Thank you Lady Hoot. Always glad to know you've been around.
Balladeer
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5 posted 1999-09-02 08:56 PM


You know, at first glance, even though it is clever, it doesn't seem to make much sense....but after seeing your comment preceding it, then it does. The feeling is shared, friend Andrew.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 1999-09-02 10:00 PM


Andrew,
I thought this was wonderful nonsense.

Andrew Scott
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7 posted 1999-09-03 12:33 PM


Sir Balladeer: Nothing like a little chaotic thought process to help make sense of it all. Glad you enjoyed.

Sey: So do I! Thanks for stopping by, I've enjoyed your work as well.


passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-04-16 11:33 PM


great little piece
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