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Master
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0 posted 09-02-99 01:47 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Sit beside me, burn inside me, I just need you near
Have some pity, you are witty and you have no fear
Hide me... hide me! Hide me silence Iím still afraid
Youíre so pretty, help me city, I must face my fate

Iím burning from desire, but this fire feels so cold
Cupidís arrow hit a sparrow missed the lonesome world
Higher... higher... take me higher! This is not enough
I was honored with great sorrow Iím alone in love


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I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-02-99 02:48 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very masterful, Master! I enjoyed this very much! 'Cupids arrow hit a sparrow missed the lonesome world' is absolutely wonderful!!


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Denise
Master
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2 posted 09-02-99 03:20 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks dsnyder! That my favorite line also.

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I fell in love and kept on falling
Justbleu
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3 posted 09-06-99 12:57 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Ohhhhhh!!!!!

I really liked this!!!

Thanks!!

Jusbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!
Master
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4 posted 09-06-99 01:05 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank you Justbleu! I'm glad you liked it.

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I fell in love and kept on falling
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 09-06-99 09:29 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Master,
I cannot say it better then dsnyder.
Master
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6 posted 09-06-99 11:17 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

THank you both!

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I fell in love and kept on falling
passing shadows
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7 posted 04-16-2004 11:47 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

good to read the old ones of yours
 
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