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The Rose (challenge from DreamEvil)

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WhtDove
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0 posted 09-02-99 01:23 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I would like to dedicate this to DreamEvil and his wife as they celebrate their 5 year anniversary today! Happy Anniversary!!!

I hope the thought comes through, this was quite a challenge.

Such a flower of beauty.
Quite perfect in creation.
This flower when compared to love,
Is strong in its relation.

Its aroma will allure you,
The fragrance will entrance.
If it captures all your senses,
Your heart begins to dance.

The colors know no boundary,
T'ween yellow, white and red.
As love sees not what's outside,
But what's inside instead.

Its petals folded tightly,
They delicately entwine.
And form a bond together,
That grows stronger over time.

'Tis quite a thing of beauty,
As it starts with petals closed.
And opens to full bloom,
As love does when it grows.


[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 09-02-99).]
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Elizabeth
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1 posted 09-02-99 01:59 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

WhtDove, I enjoyed this, as I'm sure DE and his wife did!

Congratulations, DE! Hope that there are many more happy years.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Sunshine
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2 posted 09-02-99 02:23 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

What a talented, wonderful gift you've given. Well done!
Gentle Soul
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3 posted 09-02-99 02:37 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

This is beautiful WhtDove..

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DreamEvil
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4 posted 09-02-99 05:45 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Most definitely, I do enjoy this poem. You did well, my dear. Thank you very much.

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Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive.
DreamEvil©

WhtDove
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5 posted 09-02-99 08:32 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you so much all of you! Dream you welcome very much. Hope you enjoy your anniversary!
Justbleu
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6 posted 09-15-99 06:48 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Whtdove, prolly my favorite of yours thus far!! That was a beautiful piece!! It flowed soo nicely!!

Thank You!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 09-15-99 06:55 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Dream: Congratulations..

Hugs

WhtDove: This is really lovely..

Hugs




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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Richard 33
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8 posted 09-15-99 07:01 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Nicely done! Very befitting of ones thoughts
about the subject at hand,in other word
GOOD JOB!!!!!
WhtDove
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9 posted 09-15-99 07:07 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thanks you guys for pulling this up! What a surprise that was!!! Glad you enjoyed it!
Dark Angel
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10 posted 09-16-99 02:31 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WhtDove, this is a really beautiful poem
well done !

Soul-Brother Congratulations!! Happy Anniversay

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Lisann
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11 posted 07-02-2002 12:02 AM       View Profile for Lisann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lisann

WOW....this was beautiful.  Thank you for the write. It was beautiful
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