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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

0 posted 1999-09-02 01:23 PM

I would like to dedicate this to DreamEvil and his wife as they celebrate their 5 year anniversary today! Happy Anniversary!!!

I hope the thought comes through, this was quite a challenge.

Such a flower of beauty.
Quite perfect in creation.
This flower when compared to love,
Is strong in its relation.

Its aroma will allure you,
The fragrance will entrance.
If it captures all your senses,
Your heart begins to dance.

The colors know no boundary,
T'ween yellow, white and red.
As love sees not what's outside,
But what's inside instead.

Its petals folded tightly,
They delicately entwine.
And form a bond together,
That grows stronger over time.

'Tis quite a thing of beauty,
As it starts with petals closed.
And opens to full bloom,
As love does when it grows.

[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 09-02-99).]

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 1999-09-02 01:59 PM

WhtDove, I enjoyed this, as I'm sure DE and his wife did!

Congratulations, DE! Hope that there are many more happy years.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 1999-09-02 02:23 PM

What a talented, wonderful gift you've given. Well done!

Gentle Soul
Member

since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

3 posted 1999-09-02 02:37 PM

This is beautiful WhtDove..

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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

4 posted 1999-09-02 05:45 PM

Most definitely, I do enjoy this poem. You did well, my dear. Thank you very much.

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Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive.
DreamEvil©

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 1999-09-02 08:32 PM

Thank you so much all of you! Dream you welcome very much. Hope you enjoy your anniversary!

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

6 posted 1999-09-15 06:48 PM

Whtdove, prolly my favorite of yours thus far!! That was a beautiful piece!! It flowed soo nicely!!

Thank You!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

7 posted 1999-09-15 06:55 PM

Dream: Congratulations..

Hugs

WhtDove: This is really lovely..

Hugs

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Richard 33
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa

8 posted 1999-09-15 07:01 PM

Nicely done! Very befitting of ones thoughts
about the subject at hand,in other word
GOOD JOB!!!!!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

9 posted 1999-09-15 07:07 PM

Thanks you guys for pulling this up! What a surprise that was!!! Glad you enjoyed it!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 1999-09-16 02:31 AM

WhtDove, this is a really beautiful poem

well done !

Soul-Brother Congratulations!! Happy Anniversay

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Lisann
Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

11 posted 2002-07-02 12:02 PM

WOW....this was beautiful. Thank you for the write. It was beautiful

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