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A Song Of Two

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Denise
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0 posted 09-02-99 11:21 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

His gracious soul arrived one day
And gently stole her heart away;
He made her see that life could be
A symphony of harmony;
A song of two - forevermore;
Of soaring wings above the shore
-No longer tangled in the tide
Of drowning dreams - hid deep inside
A tender heart that suffered much
Healed at long last - by true love's touch
-A gentle giant came that day
And banished anguished tears away;
Their legacy of love shall be
That symphony of harmony;
That song so true - forevermore;
Those soaring wings above life's shore...

...A stolen glance would surely see
Two hearts aflight...and so to be
Forevermore - this gentle pair..

...The nobleman and his lady fair.

(For Caroline and Mark -Love Mom)

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Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 09-07-99).]
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PhaerieChild
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1 posted 09-02-99 11:25 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

That is so beautiful!! What a touching poem. I love it.

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild

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2 posted 09-02-99 11:28 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks Wildchild. I'm glad you liked it!

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Denise...this is absolutely beautiful. I love the way you wrote this piece.
"A gentle giant came that day
And banished anguished tears away;
Their legacy of love shall be
That symphony of harmony;"
Absolutely beautiful...this couple is a lucky one, not to only have found love like this, but to also have you write it so perfectly in a poem.



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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
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4 posted 09-02-99 01:37 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Beautifully done! Well written!
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5 posted 09-02-99 02:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you hoot_owl and WhtDove. I'm glad that you liked it. I wrote this for my daughter and her fiance when they became engaged. My daughter had been through her share of heartache in the romance department. Thank God she finally found her soul mate!

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Denise
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6 posted 09-03-99 03:44 PM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

This poem is very touching ... thank you ...

[This message has been edited by traveler (edited 09-08-99).]
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7 posted 09-03-99 06:08 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

What a beautiful sentiment ... cheers to your daughter and her fiance ... we all wish them the best!

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


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8 posted 09-03-99 06:11 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tim

Very nice.
Pepper
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absolutely beautiful....in my favorites file this goes

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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10 posted 09-03-99 06:56 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you traveler, Nochtdraco, Tim and Pepper for reading and commenting. It is much appreciated!!

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Denise
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11 posted 09-04-99 01:45 AM       View Profile for Mike Pickering   Email Mike Pickering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike Pickering

It was wonderful. You captured my heart again.
Starith
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12 posted 09-07-99 11:24 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

This is far to pretty to be way back here. Back to the top with you.

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Severn
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13 posted 09-07-99 11:27 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

AHHH! Clasping heart! Beautiful. Need I say more?!
Denise
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14 posted 09-07-99 11:42 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

To Mike, Starith and Severn, thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it. It is one of my favorites!

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Denise
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15 posted 09-08-99 09:23 AM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

yes, back to the top ... with your many wonderful poems, this is my favorite ... i find it truly touching ... as one who thought he was singing a duet only to find out it was a solo ... the poem hits a wistful note with me ... thank you ...
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16 posted 09-08-99 06:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Well thank you very much traveler, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Denise
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17 posted 09-08-99 06:40 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

dude, fantastic, thats all i can think of. that was so cool, it was just awesome, wow!!!!

now i see how you get so many darn replies and i get like 0. lol



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To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

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18 posted 09-08-99 07:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you for the compliment, Keeper. I'm glad you enjoy what I write! I've been checking yours too and they are very good!


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19 posted 02-20-2011 03:54 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

What a beautiful poem.

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