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Travel intrigue

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Seymour Tabin
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Travel Intrigue

The intrigue of pictorials,
Cinderella attire,
Offered in subliminal form,
Sets desire on fire.

Transference lulls a misty sleep.
Moonlit figures dance ballet.
Tittering winks and champagne drink,
Lures you into interplay.

Veiled within surreptitiousness,
Flirtatious syrupy water.
Tasty gulps of outrageous pulp,
Makes for a heady mortar.

Vivacious waiting elegance.
The promise of love, so sweet,
Of page on page of dream on dream,
Harvesting your thoughts' complete.

To guest or not to test the scheme?
That is the question of the theme.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-02-99 10:44 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Decisions, decisions!! Very well done!

(as usual!)

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Denise
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2 posted 09-02-99 12:32 PM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

Bravo ... sorry that my responses are getting repetitive ... just in awe ... Sy,if I wasn't persistent I might quit trying to write after reading something as wonderful as this ... I'll just keep working on it ...if you keep up with this type of inspiration ... thanks again.
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-02-99 06:49 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

dsnyder and traveler,
I enjoyed your comments it is the pay of my soul.
Pepper
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I too hate to sound repetitive...but WOW Sy (sigh),you're the greatest...you just keep on getting better and better....always enjoy

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