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If I Could....

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 09-02-99 08:22 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

If I Could....


If I could turn back the clock
and make everything new again
The pain and misery I'll unlock
Life will be better then


If I could rewind the days
That, I'd certainly do
I'd bring back the sun rays
to shine upon you


If I could turn back the time
To when you were well
Everything would be fine
In pain you'll no longer dwell


If I could give you the world
That I'd do too
If I had a magic wand
I'd give it all to you

quote:
What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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DreamEvil
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1 posted 09-02-99 08:26 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Wonderful sentiment my soul-sister. You've done well. Thank you

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Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 09-02-99 08:29 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Beautiful! The thought of a magic wand, and what anyone could do for another, but the magic we desire comes from a higher power, and only he knows if what we desire is able to be granted.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-02-99 09:05 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wouldn't it be wonderful sometimes to undo our wrongs and make them right. To turn back the clocks and start over again where we need to. You have displayed that idea vividly in this poem.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Dark Angel
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4 posted 09-02-99 09:11 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Soul-Brother, you're most welcome, and Thank you
Dark Angel
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5 posted 09-02-99 09:15 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you Lost Dreamer.

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hoot thank you and yes wouldn't it be wonderful

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miriam
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6 posted 09-03-99 03:14 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

once again the beauty in your poetry has opened up a door for me. thank you.
Toerag
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7 posted 09-03-99 03:37 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Dark Angel....ya really don't know how much this poem brought thoughts to me....If I could roll time back, I'd bring back the life of those I've taken, I would have done so many things differently....I often visit my past...but I'd never want to live there again for sure......
Poet deVine
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8 posted 09-03-99 05:49 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

A wonderful poem with such a nice sentiment in it...if you turn back time for the object of this poem, could you buy some Yahoo stock for me while you're there?
Dark Angel
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9 posted 09-03-99 06:10 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you Miriam
Dark Angel
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10 posted 09-03-99 06:16 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Toerag, Thank you. If I could go back in time, there would be alot things that I'd change as well. But then when I think about it, maybe not

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Poet, sure no problem, just leave me a list lol And Thank you
Starith
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11 posted 09-04-99 12:18 AM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

How very sweet. This deserves another look. Back to the top with you!

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WhtDove
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12 posted 09-04-99 12:24 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well done my friend! We can turn back the clock so to speak. That higher power when he forgives us we start anew.
Dark Angel
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13 posted 09-04-99 08:28 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Starith, Thank you

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WhtDove, Thank you so much
Sue
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14 posted 09-04-99 01:00 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

If only we could turn back the clock!
 
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