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Lost At Sea

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~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
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Billings, MT USA


0 posted 09-02-99 02:25 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

Roaring waves inside the wind...
Crashing in my mind again...
Lost at sea without a float...
Ill without an anecdote...
Shipwrecked now, and all alone...
Not even sighs or aching moans...
The silence is so hard to bear...
Canít hear one sound- not anywhere...
Stinging smoke burning my eyes...
Canít stand the silence- miss the lies...
Raging winds across the froth...
Hanging me upon a cross...
Throwing me Ďbout- to and fro...
I have no other place to go...
Breaking me from limb to limb...
Canít let myself to think of him...
He makes me weak- I must be strong...
Though Iíve been out here way too long...
Iíve lost all hope- wonít find a sail...
No reason now to whine or wail...
Just let me fall and suffocate...
Wonít matter now... itís way too late...
Just let me drown beneath the waves...
No use trying-
I can't be saved...

©1999 Erin Solari


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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."




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Severn
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since 07-17-99
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1 posted 09-02-99 02:28 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Are you OK?! This is so sad. Written beautifully, but terribly sad.
wayoutwalt
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since 06-22-99
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2 posted 09-02-99 02:31 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

theres not land in sight one so pray over the next horizon ok buddy
~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA


3 posted 09-02-99 02:38 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you Walt and Severn... yes, I'm ok.. I'm tough... grrr!!! see? hehehe Thanks for caring though... I appreciate it...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Severn
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4 posted 09-02-99 02:54 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

You know we're here anytime.
~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
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Billings, MT USA


5 posted 09-02-99 03:39 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thanks... you are truly a friend...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


DreamEvil
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6 posted 09-02-99 04:49 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Very, very sad. We are all here for you.

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Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive.
DreamEvil©

~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA


7 posted 09-02-99 04:52 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thanks, Dream. I know you always will be.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Lost Dreamer
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since 06-20-99
Posts 2589
Normal, Illinois


8 posted 09-02-99 08:43 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Very escalating poem. There's always hope, and you have the ability to save yourself, just look beyond the pain, and reach out to your friends who will always be there through all your trials and tribulations.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


9 posted 09-02-99 08:52 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is an extreamly sad, but also beautifully written poem. Remember, beyond the horizen, there is land in sight. May you find a peaceful island where you can heal.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 09-02-99 09:03 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

one voice~
When you can write like this,how can it be hopeless?
~one voice~
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Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


11 posted 09-02-99 08:53 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Ah... my trials and tribulations don't seem so bad now that I see I have all you netpoets supporting me! Thanks, sincerely, to each and every one of you....

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
Posts 3430
Oregon, Originally From Alaska


12 posted 04-13-2003 11:48 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

These kind of times are tough....I know I have my own.  I'm just digging around the archives tonight.  Hoping all is well.
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

 
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