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Open Poetry #2

Unspoken Words

pjtavison
New Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 2
Morenci, AZ, USA

0 posted 1999-09-02 02:08 AM

Such beauty my eyes now see
I've been touched by heaven
Something deep is compelling me

Beauty whose depth is of the sea so deep
Whose surface is that reflection
From the abyss does this beauty keep

Eyes that radiate and reveal such depth
Of a soul so gentle and complex
Overwhelming me, whisking away my breath

'Tis such agony and such pleasure
To gaze at you now before me
I am alone, just to meet you is my endeavor

Such a journey before me a promise not broken
Will she hear these words
Or will they go unspoken

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-09-02 02:18 AM

Very nice!

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 1999-09-02 09:43 AM

welcome to the forums, pj. I quite enjoyed this poem... it has a dreamy flavor to it. I'll look forward to reading more of your work.

-dp

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-09-02 10:30 AM

Oh the agony and ecstasy of love! Very nicely done!

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

4 posted 1999-09-03 10:37 PM

I sure hope she hears the words. Loved your poem, and welcome to Passions.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 1999-09-03 11:51 PM

Welcome to the family! Unspoken words seep down and cause the soul to crack! Nice poem.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 1999-09-09 03:31 PM

I think this deserves a boost back up to the top. Good job!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 1999-09-09 05:45 PM

I like the format you used with this one...it works well...again, welcome.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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