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Unspoken Words

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pjtavison
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0 posted 09-02-99 02:08 AM       View Profile for pjtavison   Email pjtavison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pjtavison

Such beauty my eyes now see
I've been touched by heaven
Something deep is compelling me

Beauty whose depth is of the sea so deep
Whose surface is that reflection
From the abyss does this beauty keep

Eyes that radiate and reveal such depth
Of a soul so gentle and complex
Overwhelming me, whisking away my breath

'Tis such agony and such pleasure
To gaze at you now before me
I am alone, just to meet you is my endeavor

Such a journey before me a promise not broken
Will she hear these words
Or will they go unspoken
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Severn
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1 posted 09-02-99 02:18 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very nice!
doreen peri
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2 posted 09-02-99 09:43 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

welcome to the forums, pj. I quite enjoyed this poem... it has a dreamy flavor to it. I'll look forward to reading more of your work.

-dp
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3 posted 09-02-99 10:30 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh the agony and ecstasy of love! Very nicely done!
Lost Dreamer
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4 posted 09-03-99 10:37 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I sure hope she hears the words. Loved your poem, and welcome to Passions.
Poet deVine
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5 posted 09-03-99 11:51 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Unspoken words seep down and cause the soul to crack! Nice poem.
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Listening to every heart


6 posted 09-09-99 03:31 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I think this deserves a boost back up to the top. Good job!
hoot_owl_rn
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I like the format you used with this one...it works well...again, welcome.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
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