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Honey Get Up.....Alright Just A Minute

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PhaerieChild
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0 posted 09-02-99 01:40 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PhaerieChild

Up in the morning, get the kids off to school.
"Son you can't take the rat"..."I know it's a dumb rule."
"Honey, get up"...The heater's down and we're cold."
"Alright, just a minute"...a blanket unfolds.
"Go change your skirt"....Wear something warmer."
"Where is your coat?"...It's at the Farmer's?!"
"Honey get up"...."It's so c-o-o-ld in here"
"Alright...just a minute." Can't get it in gear.
"Wear your old coat."...Missy those shoes won't do."
"I got your lunches and Son..where are your boots?"
"Honey get up"..."It's about time to go."
"Alright...just a minute" It's starting to snow.
"Kids...go get your books and get in the truck."
"Do you have your money?"...."Okay, here's a buck."
"Honey get up"...."You gotta whole lot to do."
"Babe....go without me."...."Hey"...."I love you."


8/14/89


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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild

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....and that's the truth...
Toerag
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Then ya remember it's Saturday!
Seymour Tabin
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Wildchild,
Sounds familiar, nice job.
PhaerieChild
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4 posted 09-02-99 10:08 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Thanks guys!! There is that huh Toerag but truth it still be...

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild

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Aren't cold mornings just the worst?!
Very nicely done!
Lost Dreamer
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6 posted 09-03-99 10:32 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This was great! I could feel your rushing around, and all the craziness that goes with it. Nice job reflecting a day in the life of a busy family.

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