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Whisper to My Heart

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PhaerieChild
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since 08-30-99
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Aloha, Oregon


0 posted 09-02-99 01:24 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PhaerieChild

In a whisper I hear you
Softly calling my name
A whisper so light, but draws,
Like a moth to a flame.
It's in the air like a vapor,
Kissing my ear.
Cloud-like it passes.
Is it your voice I hear?
In a moment it's gone
No trace of its presence.
But when I hear you whisper
I retain its essence.
Softly it hides so deep in the soul.
The essence of something
I can't seem to let go.
A whisper so quiet,
Yet so very loud.
A whisper that can still...
The noise of a crowd.
A whisper that tickles
All the way to the heart.
It is your whisper darlin'
That strikes like a dart.
The essence of you
I will hide for life.
In times like this,
Our moment of strife.
In a whisper I hear........

6/15/99


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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild

© Copyright 1999 Shawna R. Holder - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 09-02-99 02:20 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

WildChild, I absolutely love this. It flows so gracefully across the page.
PhaerieChild
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2 posted 09-02-99 09:10 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Severn
Thank you so much for your words. They are very kind. W.C.

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild

JohnDoe82
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since 08-04-99
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3 posted 09-02-99 10:14 AM       View Profile for JohnDoe82   Email JohnDoe82   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JohnDoe82

This is a very impressive piece, the imagery (sp?) is wonderful.
PhaerieChild
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Aloha, Oregon


4 posted 09-02-99 10:21 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Thank you JohnDoe82. Am looking forward to reading your work as well.

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild

Denise
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5 posted 09-02-99 10:27 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Quite lovely! Sooo romantic!

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Denise
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6 posted 09-03-99 10:48 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I really like this, thanks for sharing your talent with us.

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Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


7 posted 09-03-99 10:56 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I love how it flows straight from the heart!! I loved it!!

Thank You for sharing that!!

Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!
Sue
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France


8 posted 09-04-99 02:10 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Beautiful.
shades of paul
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since 12-14-2005
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In Reality


9 posted 12-14-2005 10:33 AM       View Profile for shades of paul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shades of paul

This is a very special poem I enjoyed very much ! thanks...paul
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