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Something Beautiful and Breath-taking...

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~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
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Billings, MT USA


0 posted 09-02-99 12:53 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

Something beautiful and breath-taking
To mellow out your soul...
Something heart-warming and relaxing
has now become my goal...
You want beauty from these words of mine-
Sit back and close your eyes.
Iíll entice you with my sweetest wine
And promise no more lies...

The fresh scent of newly cut grass
and the rose-colored times in the sunrise
is where I am.
My paper is made of stardust.
My pen, a magic wand.
And I float about in fancy-free moments
upon a pink, cotton-candy-like cloud.
I hover above cities made up of tiny stars and planets.
I surf over oceans, petting Orcaís back.
And slowly, I find a sunset melting away
In to the sky...

So many, many muses...

Candlelight and Romance...
Fire, burning embers and kisses
On a clear, starry night-
fireflies in flight...
and crickets in symphony...
Mountains and Crystal lakes...
The comfort of the cool, crisp air...
And a pair of Loverís Arms entangled...

Ah, but then the Voice of the Song takes up my senses...
I fly through half notes, whole notes,
Rests and G-Clefs...
Humming tunes that I touch freely...
Up and Down, To and Fro...
My song becomes a dance upon a checkered ballroom floor...
And I am wearing an elegant night-dress,
Like a princess or a queen...
Stepping and swaying under moonlight,
In love, I turn in to your face
And on through my muses...
Past my childrenís laughter and into their eyes-
Right in that starry sparkle past their lashes...

And then through a Darkness I fly toward a Light-
Warm and inviting... loving and accepting... gentle and kind...
Your love for me-
Something beautiful and breath-taking.

©1999 Erin Solari

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


© Copyright 1999 ~one voice~ - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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since 06-22-99
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TEXAS (it's all big)


1 posted 09-02-99 01:03 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

o man tiz inspirational and beeyoutiful thanx one for the pickmeup
Severn
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since 07-17-99
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2 posted 09-02-99 02:23 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is a dream, one voice - I was lost in it. What a creation.
Dark Angel
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3 posted 09-02-99 03:02 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

I could actually hear the tune, as you dance on the checkered ballroom floor. This is so beautiful Thanks ~One Voice~
~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA


4 posted 09-02-99 03:38 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thanks all of you... I enjoyed writing it...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


DreamEvil
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since 06-22-99
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5 posted 09-02-99 06:22 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you for reposting this poem you wrote for me, dear. It truly lives up to it's title.

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Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive.
DreamEvil©

Lost Dreamer
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since 06-20-99
Posts 2589
Normal, Illinois


6 posted 09-02-99 08:15 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This was extremly brilliant in the way you played it out. Your thoughts were marvelous, I am in awe over this one. Thanks for shinning this one onto to us.
Seymour Tabin
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since 07-07-99
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7 posted 09-02-99 08:45 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

One Voice~
For one voice you did very well.
Let me help you and ring its bell.
Good job.
~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


8 posted 09-02-99 08:49 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dream: You're very welcome! It was my pleasure!

Lost Dreamer and Seymour Tabin: Thank you very much for your kind words of praise! I appreciate your support of my work!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


passing shadows
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9 posted 04-23-2004 03:35 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

wow! great imagery!
 
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