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Going out of my mind

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 09-01-99 04:46 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I'm sat here
so frustrated
so angry
the hurt
tearing
at the lining
of my heart
the tears
won't stop...
These feelings
have nowhere to go
I'm so angry
with myself
for still caring
when I'm trying
so hard to let go
The love I feel
will turn inside out
We can't talk it through
and I can't believe
that this is changing me
I wouldn't hurt a fly
yet right now
I want to lay down and die
how can two people
who shared
their very souls
end up
with nowhere to go?
Logic says
the hurt is to new
my mind and heart
argue
neither winning
I feel so vulnerable
so alone
nothing to protect me
everything was laid bare
our life we gave
to each other to share
soon
this love will change
I'll hate
the passion
we once shared
and then I hope
this wave that tosses me
will change to calm
then once again
I'll see the
colours of my trust
arc
into my faith
the rainbow...

Sorry PDV...

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.




[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-01-99).]
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Craig
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1 posted 09-01-99 04:52 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig


I wish that I could put words on a page that had the power that these contain.
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


2 posted 09-01-99 05:24 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I wish I knew some way that I could ease the pain
And give you arcs of colored light without the rain
If anger leads to healing then I'll fuel the rage
And stand beside you as you slowly turn this page
A future bright now waits unseen around the bend
It's worth the fight that you fight now, my friend.
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-01-99 05:46 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

RainbowGirl,
A powerful and well constructed poem.
I enjoyed the read.
Lucie
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4 posted 09-01-99 05:53 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Pain is always such and intense inspiration for poetry. Good job.
Denise
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5 posted 09-01-99 08:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very powerful, indeed. The pain is palpable in this piece. Well done.
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 09-02-99 03:36 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Bless you all...sometimes night is worse or maybe things seem worse at night but I'm glad I had a place to say how I felt...

HUGS and HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Balladeer
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7 posted 09-02-99 05:37 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Not the type of poem that is normal for you, dear one. It's sad to see that even rainbows cry......but I'm glad you did it here to share with us. Makes me feel like we help, in some small way. I do not like the other person in your poem.
RainbowGirl
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8 posted 09-02-99 06:27 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Balladeer

Thanks sweetheart, but the only crime he's guilty of, is one of loving me and wanting me 100% and not being able to give me that...and so I cry alone but with my friends and many guardian angels keep me company this night....I love my friends...I just got wind of their plan, keep me talking, then I can't think....Gotcha...:-)))

HUGS Balladeer
Poet deVine
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9 posted 09-02-99 06:30 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Turn your Rainbow upside down tonight and catch some healing stardust! It will get better!
RainbowGirl
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10 posted 09-02-99 07:25 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

PDV: well, if laughter is the way forward, you've shown me that in abundance...love your humour..:-)))

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


JTF
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11 posted 09-03-99 05:30 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

I pray that you'll find a ray of sunshine but that you won't hate the passion you shared ... HUSG
miriam
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12 posted 09-07-99 01:54 AM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

just here once again returning the favor. i have only one thing to say...turn that frown upside down !

you have my email if anything.
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