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Going out of my mind
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Going out of my mind |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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I'm sat here so frustrated so angry the hurt tearing at the lining of my heart the tears won't stop... These feelings have nowhere to go I'm so angry with myself for still caring when I'm trying so hard to let go The love I feel will turn inside out We can't talk it through and I can't believe that this is changing me I wouldn't hurt a fly yet right now I want to lay down and die how can two people who shared their very souls end up with nowhere to go? Logic says the hurt is to new my mind and heart argue neither winning I feel so vulnerable so alone nothing to protect me everything was laid bare our life we gave to each other to share soon this love will change I'll hate the passion we once shared and then I hope this wave that tosses me will change to calm then once again I'll see the colours of my trust arc into my faith the rainbow... Sorry PDV... ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-01-99).] |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
I wish that I could put words on a page that had the power that these contain. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I wish I knew some way that I could ease the pain And give you arcs of colored light without the rain If anger leads to healing then I'll fuel the rage And stand beside you as you slowly turn this page A future bright now waits unseen around the bend It's worth the fight that you fight now, my friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RainbowGirl, A powerful and well constructed poem. I enjoyed the read. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Pain is always such and intense inspiration for poetry. Good job. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very powerful, indeed. The pain is palpable in this piece. Well done. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Bless you all...sometimes night is worse or maybe things seem worse at night but I'm glad I had a place to say how I felt... HUGS and HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Not the type of poem that is normal for you, dear one. It's sad to see that even rainbows cry......but I'm glad you did it here to share with us. Makes me feel like we help, in some small way. I do not like the other person in your poem. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Balladeer Thanks sweetheart, but the only crime he's guilty of, is one of loving me and wanting me 100% and not being able to give me that...and so I cry alone but with my friends and many guardian angels keep me company this night....I love my friends...I just got wind of their plan, keep me talking, then I can't think....Gotcha...:-))) HUGS Balladeer |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Turn your Rainbow upside down tonight and catch some healing stardust! It will get better!  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
PDV: well, if laughter is the way forward, you've shown me that in abundance...love your humour..:-))) HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
I pray that you'll find a ray of sunshine but that you won't hate the passion you shared ... HUSG |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
just here once again returning the favor. i have only one thing to say...turn that frown  upside down  !you have my email if anything. |
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