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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-01-99 04:10 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I love rainy days, watching the drops gather slowly into a flood,
Like my tears when we're apart.

Droplets of love that spill from my lips to your ears,
Like the blood drips from my broken heart.

As each droplet of blood adds to my veins, as each
Raindrop adds to the storm,
I only dream my words will fill you with Love
And cause my cold heart to warm.

Droplets of love and droplets of Time, mark each breath, second,
And hour until you are mine.
Unlike many, I would not presume to own you
Nor pressure you to accept or decline.

But like droplets of perfume
Sweetening the air,
Your presence in my heart,
Lessens despair

I love rainy days,
For they make me
Think of you.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Gentle Soul
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1 posted 09-01-99 04:14 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

This is beautiful

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Dark Angel
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2 posted 09-01-99 04:18 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh, this is so beautiful Dream
Craig
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3 posted 09-01-99 04:26 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig

A superbly constructed poem, well written as always, congratulations.
Lucie
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4 posted 09-01-99 04:27 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

This was beautiful.. wistful.. great poem.
Nicole
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5 posted 09-01-99 04:30 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

I like the format of this one. The words have such a sweet, wistful feeling to them. Very lovely.
Sunshine
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6 posted 09-01-99 05:04 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

"Droplets of time" somehow seems to be so opulent. Well done, Sir.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 09-01-99 05:52 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DreamEvil,
No matter the topic your words are powerful
and always seem to stir my emotions.
Well done.
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 09-01-99 08:32 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I love rainy days also.....sometimes it seems as though the rain washes away all the impurities from our lives if even just for that moment

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
WhtDove
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9 posted 09-01-99 08:46 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

There is so much emotion in this it amazes me! This is just BEAUTIFUL!!!! It is sad, yet wonderful, gentle and passionate! You have really stirred my emotions and touched me! Most Excellent work Dream!
caroline
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10 posted 09-01-99 08:46 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I love everything about this poem!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Poet deVine
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11 posted 09-01-99 09:35 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Perfect. (there's nothing more to say!)
Alwye
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In the space between moments


12 posted 09-01-99 09:39 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Powerful, Beautiful, Perfect...wow, Dream. I must say, this could very well be one of the best things I've ever read..

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Nan
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13 posted 09-01-99 11:09 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Nicely done, DE....
Lost Dreamer
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14 posted 09-03-99 09:48 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I am bumping this back up to the top for anyone else who may have missed it like me the first time around. Great job!

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Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.
DreamEvil
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15 posted 09-04-99 02:09 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you all for the response to this piece.
Mike Pickering
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16 posted 09-04-99 02:11 AM       View Profile for Mike Pickering   Email Mike Pickering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike Pickering

All I can say is bravo
Kelly
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17 posted 09-04-99 01:56 PM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

This is so beautiful......Thanks
~one voice~
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18 posted 09-04-99 05:03 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dream, this is so beautiful! I can't believe I've missed it up until now! I'm in love this poem! Would you mind if I printed it and hung it on my wall?
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