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Hello, I'm new and this is my first post. ^^ Most of what I write is like prose-poetry... usually no rhyme and only a slight rhythm if any. Any critiques are welcome.
On a bright, quiet day
She set off on the path toward the beach
Under the endless blue sky, filled with billowing clouds
As her sandals echoed on the charcoal asphalt
A lazy breeze blew by, carrying the briny ocean scent
The walk there was a small peaceful journey
The forms of all the whitewashed houses bathed in sunlight was an uplifting visage
The passage between the road and beach was like a small portal, a tranquil sanctuary
The sight of the wooden steps leading to the sand, framed by swaying marsh grasses was like a sweet dream
The warm sand, hazy air and fresh, salty smell....like a daydream, like no other...
The crashing of the waves as they hit the shore, the whisper as their foamy tips beckon......
The cool, rejuvenating sensation of the waves washing everything away, unparalleled....
Through a misty midday dream...
The vision of a girl alone by the ocean...
on a sun-splashed afternoon