detrix23
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since 07-12-2009
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0 posted 07-12-2009 12:57 AM
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Bitter
Slipped down into a puddle, covered with mud, and a tear streaked face. My heartaches, but that’s how you left. Now I know what I did was never good enough for you; never really seemed up to par. With all those things he and she can do and all your comparisons, how could I ever live up.
But don't worry I'm not bitter because you're going to; you're the one that's going to be bitter. When you see me and you realize how brightly I shine and that you're never going to have me again.
Well on that rainy day after I was soaked through with the rain, I picked myself up with my own two hands and feet. And I walked away from the memories and all the things that could be. I wiped away my tears and made myself stronger. Who cares if I'm not up to expectation, I gotta do it my way, and that’s the way it’s going to be.
But don't worry I'm not bitter because you're going to; you're the one that's going to be bitter. When you see how far I've come, and how much I have changed. I'm going to shine so bright that you'll just wish to stand near; funny how that’s how it’s going to be, now that I'm gone and no longer care. I'm moving on, but that’s when you're going to, because you're the one that’s going to be bitter.
I think I use you way too much, also the flow seems very broken. Please tell me what you think and suggestions are welcome.
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I liked the story.
