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The first day of my new life
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bellalovessomeone New Member
since 2008-11-20
Posts 9 |
In 9th grade i was talking to my best friend Robbin, and a boy walked by he was cute, so being outgoing i asked him his name the first thing that came to his mind was Toaster Strudle. We all laughed and i kept my eye on him but, i wasn't the only one. He was funny and cute, but a little odd i still liked him. Robbin wanted to go out with him and they started dating. This isn't the end but i'll write more soon. Life is pleasant. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I sure would like it if that premise would work when you get older - you like someone and can date instantly.  Cute little story. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Cute though perhaps you could have embellished a bit more ... Life's short. Think hard! |
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