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norunnin
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0 posted 2009-03-06 11:37 PM


The secret exposed.
Like a forgotten corpse freed from the depths of a lagoon, it startles and revolts. Upon the beach her brother and the murderer converse. "I know", says the brother. "I knew you would know", replies carelessly the murderer. "This is a terrible act. How will you react, when i tell you i put the knife in her back? For I know that i cannot take it back.", and so the murderer waits for him to react. Her brother wearily, tearfully, unguardedly, and mysteriously replies, "i know that you cannot take it back, but know that i cannot blame you, if i were i your shoes i would have done the same thing. for i am not a fool."

[This message has been edited by norunnin (03-07-2009 02:10 AM).]

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1 posted 2009-03-08 02:35 PM


I wonder if there will be more to follow.
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2 posted 2009-03-08 05:23 PM


maybe. the play is a metaphor for what is happening during the intermission(real life).
i havent decided if im going to talk about my real life. if i do the next will be called intermission

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