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Ketooaina
Junior Member
since 2007-04-20
Posts 37
Nucla, Colorado

0 posted 2008-09-10 10:05 AM


This strange feeling in my heart is overwhelming.
It resembles the feeling of being under pressure.
I hold it as if I don't know what I want to do with it.
As you come closer, the feeling grows and grows.
Is it possible that I am falling in love with you?

This strange feeling is messing with my heart and mind.
It resembles the feeling of being confused.
I hold it as if I don't want it...as if it's something bad.
As you come closer, I get lost in you...the whole being of you.
Is it possible that I am falling in love with you?

This strange feeling seems to be everywhere at once.
It resembles the air we breathe...it's everywhere we go.
I hold it as if it's something dear yet not that important.
As you come closer, I'm breathing you in...but I can't breathe you out.
Is it possible that I am falling in love with you?

This strange feeling makes me vulnerable to you.
It resembles the way fear can change the human mind.
I hold it as if I'm scared of it, yet not terrified of it.
As you come closer, I find myself getting weaker with every step you take.
Is it possible that I am falling in love with you?

This strange feeling draws me closer to you every day.
It resembles the way beauty draws the eye.
I hold it as if I might lose it, yet not quite so.
As you come closer, my senses fall apart.
Is it possible that I am falling in love with you?

This strange feeling makes me long for the things I dream of.
It resembles a longing that will never be fully cured.
I hold it close to my heart that it may come true.
As you come closer, my lips reach your's for a kiss.
Is it possible that I am falling in love with you?

This strange feeling flows through my heart like water in a stream.
It washes away all of my fears and doubts.
It resembles the way tears wash away pain and saddness.
I hold as if it's my healer, my comforter...my guardian.
As you slowly break the kiss...the feeling finally makes its way to a stop.
Is it possible that I am falling in love with you?

This strange feeling has left me surprised.
It resembles how news, good or bad, can leave you.
I hold it as if it isn't real...yet it is so real that I can't comprehend it.
As you come back for another kiss...you ask before our lips touch...
"Do you love me?"
"Yes! I love you!"


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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
1 posted 2008-09-10 11:34 AM


Great imagry!!
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