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justme<3
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since 2008-08-30
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none of ur business

0 posted 2008-08-30 04:40 AM


a mirror is a meerreflection of the outside but never trully knows the inside. . . .

your scared, dont know were to turn
the pain inside is an aching burn
confused and so unsure
not really sure there is a cure
heart broken nd torn
your nerves streched and worn
your world has lost all color
everything so dark and gray
all your dreams just kinda faded away

thtats wat my mirror cant tell me about myself


life is short live it to the fullest

© Copyright 2008 jordan - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2008-09-03 07:55 PM


Nice except for the spelling...James
Sunshine
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2 posted 2008-09-04 04:05 PM


Hello Jordan. Welcome to Passions! As this is a prose forum, your poem won't be seen by many in here, or will be overlooked as it is not necessarily prose.

Would you like to have this moved to a poetry forum of your choice?

Sunshine


" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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