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Passions in Prose

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starwatcher
New Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 4
The Caribean

0 posted 2008-05-05 11:57 AM

Tonight
there was nothing else
in this vintage light
only hope
only the quantum flow your heart saw
a pearl moon emanating like the birth
of comets not yet found
you tilted softly across the verandah
we streched like pilgrims on a return
to love's universal beyond
we were the world within your eyes
and the dreams only left once
in the graveyards.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-05-10 04:14 AM

This is really lovely. I think that more people would read it and enjoy it if you posted in Open Poetry.

Welcome to PiP.

Alison

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

2 posted 2008-05-11 12:04 PM

Beautiful

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-05-18 05:57 PM

Enjoyed...James

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2008-05-18 07:28 PM

Welcome to Passions and what an exceptionally grand entrance you have made. I felt like a fly on a leaf in this scene you set. Beautiful!

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