navwin » Main Forums » Passions in Prose » A Prosie for Tessa
Passions in Prose
Post A Reply Post New Topic A Prosie for Tessa Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Escobar
New Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 6


0 posted 2007-10-25 07:22 PM


I called on Tuesday to ask you out for old time’s sake, just to take you away from the oxcarts and dung. But you were busy gathering up crumbs from our loaves and fishes and said your basket was full of moth holes and scorpions. On Saturday night I opened a bottle of fifteen year old and christened the crystal with gold.  Rang you again, said the moon had begged pardon for clouds in the garden and asked if his sugarplum please would come home. You sweetened the connection with a brief tease and tart, but answered that the granadilla was bitter and wormwooded as the absinth of which you’d grown fonder. On a coming down Sunday, I texted my last message with the stone finger of a martyr and pled my case to your long distance hangman posed over the disconnect. In pitiless rhyme before the click, you told me apples were rosy in your far pasture and all the wine from a distant city couldn’t make Eden flow like a river again.



© Copyright 2007 Escobar - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2007-10-25 11:56 PM


This is indeed, some lovely prose...

Thank you for gracing us, Escobar.

Please! Check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Escobar
New Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 6

2 posted 2007-10-27 10:21 AM


Thank you Sunshine.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Main Forums » Passions in Prose » A Prosie for Tessa

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary