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Twilight Warrior
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The World That Never Was

0 posted 2007-08-23 11:25 PM


There are times when I....maybe everyone questions their existence, their worth. At these times we look into the eyes of others to see who we are, who we are perceived to be. Everyone has to prove their existence.....something that defines who they are. It is only through pleasing others that we find true happiness. Thereby in being of use to them, we have an impression on someone's life. If we died, we would be missed.
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TomMark
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1 posted 2007-08-24 01:30 AM


ah, what a sigh of a young life.

Wind dropped a seed between the rocks. It spourts in spring; blooms in summer; bears its offspring in fall and dries and dies in winter. No praise, no applaud in  it's life. Bees ignore it. Butterflies distains it. People step on it. But it is still able to live its full life anyway.

We exist because we exist as a truth not as other people's view. We live in real life. We do not live in other people's opinion. We live not because others are living. Thousand pairs of eyes watch us and they draw hundred thousand conclusions (because people change mind frequently). but, we are still who we are. We have our own velue system..doesn't matter it is not welll developed. We have our own judgement..doesn't matter it is not as "smart" as other's. It is good that you can live on your own. It is better that you can help to support your own family. It is best that you have some leftovers for something else you want to do and someone else whom you think needs help.

It is always a wonderful to think about something about life.


Twilight Warrior
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2 posted 2007-08-25 10:59 AM


A seed hm....Well the wheels of destiny continue to turn........life goes on. Maybe I learned something from you this day.

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

TomMark
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3 posted 2007-08-26 07:10 PM


If you want, tell me why did you write "If we died, we would be missed".
Twilight Warrior
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4 posted 2007-09-10 08:14 PM


It simply means that there are people that care about your life, that other people are affected by your actions. In other words.....one is not simply existing.

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-10-07 07:53 PM


If we love and care for those around us in thought and action they will accept us and have feelings for us, and when we die we will be missed...because no one likes to lose someone they care for...James
fractal007
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6 posted 2007-10-14 10:51 PM


Through pleasing others?  That sounds a little shallow.  However, I can relate to the fact that we all need to feel loved in order to feel that our existence has meaning or purpose.

Any idiot can see that the result is true.
-- argumentum ad idiotum
Me!

Twilight Warrior
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7 posted 2007-10-22 09:34 PM


fractal- shalllow....I don't follow your understanding but i'm glad you liked it.

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

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