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dollmaker
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0 posted 2007-03-08 07:03 PM


MAJOR NELSON'S BIRTHDAY WAS IN THREE DAYS AND HIS

LOVELY BRIDE JEANIE WHO LOVED HER HUSBAND VERY

MUCH WANTED TO PLAN A BIG BIRTHDAY SURPRIZE HER

LOVING HARDWORKING HUSBAND. HE HAD TOLD HIS

BELOVED JEANIE THAT HAD WANTED TO TRAVEL THE WORLD,

WITH HER BUT HE HAD VERY LITTLE TIME TO DO SO. HE

HAD A JOB @ THE SPACE PROGRAM WHICH KEPT HIM VERY

BUSY BETWEEN GOING UP IN SPACE, MEETINGS WITH DR.

BELLOWS HIS BOSS, AND CRAZY WORK HOURS OF LATE, HE

WAS TRULY UNDER STRESS AND STRAIN. STILL HE MADE

TIME FOR HIS DARLING JEANIE, HE WOULD BRING HOME

ROSES FOR NO REASON, MAKE ROMANTIC DINNERS FOR HER

ON THE WEEKENDS AND LATELY EVEN WHEN THEY FROUGHT

HE FORGAVE HER INSTANTLY AND HE DID NOT MAKE HE GO

IN HER BOTTLE. SHE KNEW IT WAS BECAUSE HE FELT

GUILTY THAT HE COULD NOT SPEND MORE TIME WITH HER.

SHE LOVED HIM AND SHE KNEW WHAT SHE MUST DO. "I

WILL TELL DR BELLOWS TO GIVE MY MASTER AND LOVE OF

MY LIFE MAJOR NELSON TIME OFF,AND IF HE DOES NOT

AGREE I WILL USE MY MAGIC IF ALL ELSE FAILS."

SHE SET OUT FOR DR BELLOWS OFFICE SHE LOOKED

STUNNING IN RED DRESS IT WAS A LOOK ONLY SHE COULD

PULL OFF. SHE WAS WEARING A CUTE SUN DRESS AND A

MATCHING SUN HAT.

SEE PART 2

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2007-03-09 03:08 PM


May I suggest no capital letters and paragraphs to help make this easier to read? If you have any questions, please contact me.




rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
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2 posted 2007-03-10 01:13 PM


Can I second it
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