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MindBodySoul
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0 posted 2007-01-30 12:31 PM



On our first date
I remember so clearly as if it were yesterday, not sure if you recall the feeling, but I do.It was a night to remember, though I had to break the enchantment early. I will never forget how special you made me feel that night.I had all of your attention… there was no one else in that room but you and me..or so it felt. I hope you felt like that too.

You held me close to you and I could feel your warmth.I could feel your heart beating in rhythm with mine.I could feel the need and want of your body for mine. We were in a zone of our own, unlike anything I have ever felt.It was an unforgettable connection… a coming together of 2 souls.Who were searching for each other and on this night found each other again

We were in a place full of people… but they did not exist that night.It was as if we owned that little space, for the duration of our stay.
I can see people watching, but we did not care.
It was as if they could see how nothing existed but you and me.You kissed me ever so passionately… how my heart swelled up of love for you. Yes on our first date… I fell in love with you, but that was my secret.

Your hand felt so warm on my naked skin, as your hand caressed the base of my back.The same place that now holds the symbol of my love and devotion for you.

Today, I look back and I can feel that moment all over again.I close my eyes and I could see us in that place again, I could feel that moment as if it were yesterday.....

Jen--->MindBodySoul

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