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pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
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0 posted 2006-10-03 05:02 PM




      I was at a loss of where to start my latest

endeavor. I wasn’t even sure that I could write

well.  But, taking this all in stride, I chose to

begin my story of an ordinary girl who needed more

than she could get. Who had more than she

deserved.  

© Copyright 2006 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
the_girl_next_door
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since 2006-02-26
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1 posted 2006-10-03 10:42 PM


wow.. you said like so much in so little words. this took my breath away.. especially the last two sentences.. I want to hear more.. keep me posted (emial me or something)

~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

patience_iago
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since 2006-08-30
Posts 54

2 posted 2006-10-20 09:41 PM


wheres the rest! Darn.
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