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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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"Why is this happening to me?" "All I can tell you is that you chose this for yourself." "Why would I choose such a life, I am confused." "I cannot explain to you why, I only know that it has been written." "When has it been written?" "Many lives ago. What you experience, you have decided." "What of the tears I cry? What of the pain I endure? Are you telling me I purposely planned this life for myself?" "Yes, that is exactly what I am telling you." "If I had planned this, when exactly did I plan this?" "Before you arrived here, right after your death." "My death? But I am still living . . ." "Yes, you are living now and you have lived before." "You speak in riddles." "I only speak from my heart, you know this to be true in your own heart." "Can I ask another question, please?" "Of course, you can ask me anything you like." "Am I living a good life?" "Yes, my child. You have accomplished what you must this time around and you will accomplish so much more." "Thank you, thank you for hearing me, my prayers." "You are most welcome, it is what I am here for." |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
a conversation with a guardian angel....  that is what I saw...it's excellent by the way.... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Yes, a conversation with an angel. Such soothing dialogue... Great job on the challenge! sadie |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well to be honest at first it sounded like me talking to myself in the morning, and wondered how you overheard honest! I wish to think it is a conversation with God, or His Holiness, The Dali Lama, and possibly through meditation. The idea of the continual rebirthing of a human body until the soul has reached a state of perfection, then back with its source (God or the "Universal Soul") is a conversation I will have any time with any one. Good jobber Suzie Q! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ha ha you got it Sharon, it is God and self, mostly God . . . I am so glad you guys saw all of that because actually, it is all of that . . . now that I read it again, it could be an angel or a spirit guide . . . see? You guys help me to see what I write sheesh. Thank you so much for seeing and reading, I am learning so much. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
lol@Mysteria! Don't ya hate when all the voices talk at once? And Susie? This IS marvelous! Quite an unexpected scenario, and there was never a moment of confusion as to who was speaking. What a fresh approach to this! I'm so proud of you!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
aww you make me feel SO good . . . Thank you, K . . .  and ya know? I actually do talk to myself like this, cept I dont refer to myself as "my child" LOL, then I would need to be taken away . . . Susan and Sadie? I never saw the angel angle, thank you for that. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL at Serenity..."all the voices..." It does get to be a little loud in the quiet. Excellent piece of work, Sue.  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well done! Writing dialogue this way is just to get the feel for people speaking to each other and to make it natural without the 'he said breathlessly' and 'she replied with a grin'. Sometimes just writing what people say to each other is more natural than adding the 'writers stuff'. Then you can go back and edit the piece. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Kari . . . and thank you Sharon, I agree . . . this was an excellent exercise. You have sparked a lot of inspiration for me. |
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