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Juju
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0 posted 2005-02-05 05:40 PM



Maybe he never existed. I remember so much about him; I can't deny him that.  There, in my soul, he will linger like cobrah's venom. Making me cringe at his sight. I became his prey long ago, and still he chases me. He knows... every thing.

"Mom did you get rid of it?" I asked my mother.  I hoped she ruthlessly disposed of him.

"Honey this time I through it in the incenerator," My mother yeld out in the kiten.

I stepped over a viarity toys on the floor. All of a sudden in less then a second I felt the wood floor on my face. "ouh!" I screamed. "Mom lana left her toys out again." I turned around and to my horrer there he stood so proud.  

"Furby wants to be your friend." The doll said. I watched his eye lids go up and down sowly as he spoke.

"Mom you didn't get rid of it!" I chocked.

"He must of came back again," my unasuming mother replied.

"I am going to be your friend, lets play... your fun," The furby replied.

"No go away from me," I screamed ou loud

"Furby your friend, furby knows where you live, furby watches you when you sleep." The doll replied.

"Mom get that creepy doll out of the house." I screemed

"You," mom replied, " He is just so cute"

"Furby wants to go nite nite," The doll replied

"I'll give you night night" I sinically replied.  I couldn't help, but smile to what I was to do to that doll. He cant be flushed, burned,  frozen or trashed, time to fight pure evil with pure evil. I got up from the floor and went to my roo. The furby was on my bed, wich wasn't a big surpize.

Quickly, I flipped in my Richard Simmons tape and turned on the telivision.
"Helo evry body, we are going to dance away that fat!" Said the little man with an afro  The "locomotion" music started to play and soon I could here screeches of the furby.

"NO!!>!>!>!>!, How did know my weakness, furby wants to be your friend, Furby loves you; furby loves you alot!?" The furby said before he started to malfunction.

"phew, They are all gone" I thought, until I head oput side my window what seemed to be a flock of furby,

"Furby knows where you live, furby wants to be your friend, Furby l;oves you and furby watches you when you sleep."
-Ok. Horrible story. This is for my aim, to tease my friend. I make these furby impressions, that my friends say are creepy. It's just a spoof. Richard Simmons, is not actually pure evil


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[This message has been edited by Juju (02-05-2005 09:33 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-02-07 09:35 AM


It is a cute story... those furby things can be really creepy. Some grammer and spelling things; it got a bit distracting. Maybe you should have someone else proofread before you post. It's easy to overlook some things! (I probably have errors in this reply!) Thanks for posting.

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Juju
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2 posted 2005-02-19 10:55 PM


ok will do

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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