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0 posted 2004-05-22 06:19 AM


"Are you asleep yet?"

When a person begins to fall asleep, they twitch. Small, non-violent seizures. When I sleep in the same bed with someone, I'm always the last to get there. Although, I've noticed that I do twitch, as well.

"Well, if you're asleep, I love you.. if you're not, well, you're ignoring me and I hate that."

"I would be asleep if you'd quit talking for two seconds."

"Well, that was uncalled for."

"So was promising me something to see."

"Well, did you close your eyes when I told you to?"

"No, but I did shortly thereafter."

"You should've done it right after I said it."

"Does it really make a difference?"

"Maybe. Did you see anything?"

"No, well..wait, yeah. I saw a bird."

"Dead or alive?"

"I'm not sure."

"Well, I wasn't thinking about birds."


© Copyright 2004 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-24 07:37 AM


Will we find out what you were thinking in part 3?

I'm looking forward to it

Maree.

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Larry C
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2 posted 2004-05-24 08:17 PM


Meghan,
You put a smile on my face.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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3 posted 2004-06-03 09:08 PM


I keep coming back for part three, and it's not there, so I get sad.. This is intriguing, please write more.
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4 posted 2004-06-04 02:48 PM



Tease.     Keep it coming.

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