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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-03-13 04:33 AM



Gifts of love sent to you, chosing special presents.

Recieving your packages and letters thrilled me.

Time spent in parks on benches, writing love poems to you, while the sun blazed.

Summer nights with screaming and twitterng swifts and swallows, explaining my love for you in ryme.

Fantastic heroic poems of romance and passion.....
one hundred plus poems of my heart for you........but it was not enough.........

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2004-03-15 06:15 PM


It's kinda short, but has some good memories in this one. Maybe you could go into a little bit more detail about each memory (like say why "it wasn't enough"). I liked it though....it was like a memoir. Hope to read more soon.

~sky

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Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2008-06-04 06:09 AM


It was enough...
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