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merlynh
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0 posted 2004-03-02 09:00 PM


    Do I dare take plunge into the bottomless pit know as love for it runs deep with jagged edges one can hung on for years or worse fall hopelessly forever in a blind mist.  Could it be the loneliness that haunts my soul that craves closeness with touch, and raptures desire.  Nay I can not deny the whippings of the buffoon, the ecstasy of spiritual salvation toward a moment silence of rest.  Yes!  I know well the relief, I know well God does not approve. It is only later I repent, it is when I am alone.  It is the wantonness of one, a friendship, and a mate to be reproved from his grace. When years of sand have covered the plateau sweeping exposes the harden rock.  The mirage stands high upon our hopes as God looks on and considers where we don’t.  In that moment lost do we hold onto weakness our wretched friend whose excuse is ransom for our miserable repentance. Does God look on, and on, and on, where we refuse to go, on, and on. Isn’t it time we conquer our weakness from our wretched souls.  Love God as much as he lets us go on with our useless lives. Or do we take that plunge into the bottomless pit for the name of our own love onward in a blind mist.



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skyshine
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1 posted 2004-03-04 07:02 PM


Very strong words!!

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

miscellanea
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2 posted 2004-09-16 11:11 PM


Such depth.  Now I have read four of yours, all so very different!  I wouldn't have guessed any of them were by the same author.  Which is your favorite style?

                 miscellanea

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3 posted 2004-09-18 01:07 AM


I think at one point or another everyone has felt what you've written about. You did a good job at voicing it

and then He created the horse...

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