»
Main Forums
»
Passions in Prose
»
Sweet Revenge Prologue
| Passions in Prose |
|
Sweet Revenge Prologue |
|
|
Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
This is the very short prologue of one of my novels, Sweet Revenge, a fantasy/horror/sci fi story that I started over one year ago. This prologue is just to introduce Raven and Brale, nothing more because chapter one starts six months prior to this event. Thank you, Lex The mindless chatter of the various doctors, psychiatrists, and other professionals was giving Raven Davis a migraine. She rubbed her temples trying to ease the ache with no success. These people weren’t really the cause of her migraine, but she liked blaming them. They were there, her family was not. “Dr. Davis?” Raven turned and looked at the young woman who had spoken. She was young, perhaps only twenty, with dark brown hair and bright, inquisitive green eyes. “Yes,” she ventured with a raised eyebrow. Few people dared to approach her since the incidents at Seaview. This girl was gutsy. “My name is Heather Brale. I’d like to speak with you for a few moments if that’s okay. About my brother.” Brale. A name that haunted her dreams when she had any. Trey Brale almost cost her everything. You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person. [This message has been edited by Lexia (08-08-2003 10:27 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Alexia Raine - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I really like your style of writing and this little part of your story left me curious for more.  |
||
|
Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
Thank you, Lex You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
