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tonia
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since 2003-06-13
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taiwan

0 posted 2003-07-01 01:35 AM


Hi,
I finally finished my third part of "the Deepest Sentiment". I hope you enjoyed the first and second part of it. If what I wrote below doesn't quite make sense, you can always read the 1st and 2nd to get a better idea of it. I certainly wont mind if the comments are critical, because the main reason I wrote this is because I want to improve my writing skills and let out my feelings. Thank you!  

      The third part of "the Deepest Sentiment"
  Rational, pragmatic, practical. These are the three main features of human being. It's actually a shame and an advantage at the same time if you think it the good way. An old Chinese say: god only blesses people who are dumb and naive. It is hard for the girl to change. It's hard for her to act immature and think with a good mind. Why? It's all because of the events she has gone through. It really is brutal for a girl like her to have had experienced these ruthless conditions. It really isn't fair how some girls are pretty, rich, and always receive a high gpa at school and everything goes the way they want it to be. Is there really a perfect girl?
  
  There is no such thing in this world called ¡§ideal¡¨. Everyone has an unknown part of their personality; it's just that they didn't display their character flaws. They are well hidden under their artificial masks. God is fair. He gives everyone the same amount of opportunities. The only difference is how everyone utilizes the opportunities distinctly. Some choose to use them wisely, while some may squander away their precious opportunities. Your decision is what that influences the result, it all depends on you. You get to select your future.    

  Despite the fact, the girl still wants to dominate her destiny. She doesn't believe that she can't change fate. In fact, everyone who once had a ferocious lifetime usually turn out to be a successful person. They've gone through bitterness and loss, so they know what to cherish and what to treasure and value. In comparison to those rich spoiled kids, they're materialistic and they don't know what to cherish and fritter away everything they have.

  Irony, mockery, sarcasm. Have you ever felt that you're in the middle of a trapeze? You can't go back nor can you move on. What does it feel like to be tricked and joked on? When you can't even get someone to find a ladder for you, what can you do? You don't expect someone to help because there is no such ladder that is that tall. All you can do is rely on yourself, and never cast your hopes too high. You'll have to find your way down by yourself, or you either conquer your height phobia and finish the rest. It's always better to set an easy goal to start off. Next time remember not to climb too high; giving yourself an excessive challenge may cause worse outcomes.        

  Hard work will pay off. As long as you make the effort, you will receive the same amount of profit you gave. Revenue and expenditure is always balanced. Never think negative because there's always a chance, if you don't ever try, then you will never be one step near success. Lastly, remember to always learn a lesson from failure. Everyone makes mistakes, even god. May god bless every single person who wants to become successful. I encourage all of you and hope everyone can reach your dreams. Cheers ~ peace.  
~* End *~  
thanx for reading~            


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RedOz
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since 2003-06-29
Posts 4

1 posted 2003-07-01 10:51 PM


made me think of a quote from a uni course I'm doing
"the study of ideology is among other things a study of the way humans come to invest in their own unhappiness."
it really made me think about why people want to be succesful anyway, like who are they competing against?
thank YOU!


tonia
Junior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 41
taiwan
2 posted 2003-07-03 02:33 AM


I'm glad it helped...i hope you enjoyed it!!  
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