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Larry C
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0 posted 2003-06-19 09:20 PM



Renewed by You
By Larry Chadwick
For my wife


It happens for so many different events. But every time is equally exhilarating. I cannot decide if it starts in my heart or my stomach first. That little flutter in my tummy that bodes of excitement. And the instant acceleration of my heartbeat which confirms pleasure has already begun. All of that when you enter the room. Perhaps it is the quickened breath and instant smile, mirroring yours, just at your touch.

It is a gift just to be in your presence. A gift that is never diminished no matter how often it is given. To lock eyes and to gaze, each time, deep into your sole, as if by open invitation, instantly restores all that is within me. And to do that consistently bears testimony to the meaning of our love and caring.

Stunning is an adverb redefined by your presence. Peace and satisfaction are restored by your presence. Confidence is renewed by your presence. But the sparkle for the gem of all these things is to hear you laugh. To hear you sigh. To see you smile. To see you relax in the confidence of us. And incredibly, when apart, all of this can be recalled and relived in just a glance at a picture of just one of these precious moments. How I have grown to love being renewed by you.
May 22, 2003


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1 posted 2003-06-19 10:37 PM


ahhhhhhhhhh...to be loved like this....h
Larry C
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2 posted 2003-06-20 12:18 PM


Helen,
It'll happen...trust me. And thank you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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3 posted 2003-06-28 11:35 AM


Stunning is an adverb redefined by your presence

So sweet!

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4 posted 2003-06-28 11:59 AM


deep into your sole, OOPS!

loved the tenderness of this write,
but I gotta tellya, I did chuckle at this typo

Larry C
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5 posted 2003-06-29 12:31 PM


kaile,
Awww. Thanks.

Kacy,
And no ability to fix it either. Sucks. And thanks.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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