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J. K. Mitchell
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0 posted 2003-05-05 07:54 PM


  I sat in the backseat of the car studying him.  Our friends chattered endlessly but I heard nothing.  All I could do was stare at that little mark on the back of his neck.  
     I wanted to kiss it.  Of course, doing so was taboo because he was my friend.  My best friend that I was in love with.  
     His voice slid over me like silk and it soothed me.  I was broken out of my daze by him calling of my name.


     "Hmm?"    I asked looking into his eyes trying not to become lost in them.

     "What do you want to do?"

     I shrugged.  "I dunno.  A movie sounds good."  He nodded and the discussion continued on. My  attention strayed once more to that little mark on his neck.  All I had to do was lean forward and....


     His head turned and our eyes locked.  "What are you doing?"  He asked his lips curving into  smile.

     Shock filled my eyes.  I had almost done it.  I almost kissed his neck!  I had to play it off.  I smiled at him devilishly.  I decided to tell the truth and let him believe it a lie.

     "Actually,  I was going to kiss that little mark you have on the back of your neck."  

     I could see the complete dismissal is his eyes.  His best friend would never do anything like that!  No!  Not me!


     "Whatever babe."  He turned around and I leaned back.    My eyes once more gazed upon that little mark.

"Cuidado con mi corazon."--R. Martin

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2003-05-05 08:14 PM


Hmm. Maybe she should try it again some time?
Perhaps he would even welcome it.

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2 posted 2003-05-05 10:46 PM


I agree with Midnitesun...he might like it. I know from experience that it's very good to fall in love with your best friend. My Honey and I were best friends before we fell in love and still are.
Hugs,
Ethel

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Between the Lines
3 posted 2003-05-06 11:32 AM


maybe he was tempting you...

M

J. K. Mitchell
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4 posted 2003-05-18 07:35 PM


This is very good.
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