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Fariegirl
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0 posted 2003-03-01 12:31 PM


As she ran into the depths of the forest, the sounds if eternal darkness started to catch up to her. She ran harder, but so did it. She ran over mountains, and brooks, but the thunderous sound of it was at her heals. She finaly stoped, there is no use of running when you are running from yourself.
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1 posted 2003-03-03 06:10 AM


*blinks* this one stopped me in mid-chew.  Short, and very very true.  Hmm... something to ponder, perhaps.

Sometimes you find a friend where once there wasn't one. Sometimes you find a love where once there was a friend.

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2 posted 2003-03-03 09:53 AM


Neat little write, but at least 4 spelling errors in these few lines.  
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