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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-02-23 01:23 PM



Hey there. This is (again) a free write that I wrote in my creative writing class. I am typing in here so that I can get feed back for it so that I can turn it into a story. Thank You for taking your time to help me with my writing.

Thanks

Willows-

Dancing between two willow trees. Embarking on a mysterious journey. Day pass, walking through the deserted forests. Beckoning you to wait, a prince on a white mare riding in the sunlight. Head held high. Today brings you to a new conclusion. That maybe you aren't normal. Walking through the mystic meadows. You notice a flock of white. In this white you can see many irridecent horns. A field with unicorns. Enchanting your mind. Mystical. You stand in awe  of this beauty standing in front of you. The mellow dew drops formed on the blades of luscious green grass drop to the ground like a sprinkling from the april showers.

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    Love Always
       Kellie

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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
1 posted 2003-02-25 09:43 AM


I would love to see the story you build out of these lovely words. A new Fairy Tale in the making?
Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
2 posted 2003-03-29 09:09 PM


If I continue it you'll be the first to know!! Thanks for the support!

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  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

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