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Lonely Always
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0 posted 2002-09-06 01:25 AM


This little bit of spiritual prose was inspired by a very interesting dream I had last night...
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I lay in bed, my pulse racing. The sound of a car pulling up only caused me to be more frightened. "Who would be coming to our house at this hour??"
The noise of the door opening confirmed my greatest fears. Someone was in our house! I arose from bed, Closing my door and locking it, attempting to assure myself I would be alright. The sound of screaming and gunshots near my position made me realize. My familey was being killed! I ran to the window, trying to get it open. My lock, unfortunately, dose not have a key lock, and the intruder soon found a way to open it. I paniced holding my hands up, I prayed that I would be safe. The intruder froze.
"You... Believe in God??"
I looked up from my prayer, and simply nodded before again praying. He pointed his gun, and I cringed, prepared to die. A shot resounded through the room, and I collapsed in pain. Instead of my head, however, he had shot straight through the middle of my hand...
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More where that came from... Anyone want me to continue??

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1 posted 2002-09-06 01:28 AM


Oh my goodness, you can't stop now.  Joyce
Lonely Always
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2 posted 2002-09-06 01:34 AM


Yeah. It's got a really sad ending, but I have to tell more about that tommorow. TTFN
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Final Chapter of my life, written and the end.

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3 posted 2002-09-06 01:43 AM


Welcome to Passions, and don't keep us in suspense now! You have to keep it going, and I can't wait for the next installment.

The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it.
Sharon    

Wanda
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4 posted 2002-09-07 12:17 PM


Oh my, of course, you should continue the story.  You have left us hanging in suspense.  Wanda
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